The First Day of My Vacation

This is the first day of my vacation I'm on my way to the lambert airport in St. Louis. My flight leaves at 3:00pm. It's 1:45 now I have to stop and get me some snacks for the ride, to put in my had bag. My flight to california is only going to take two hours. Bye, omvoyauge, see you in three days.

Who is a Hypocrit

The people that I know who are hypocrits are the people who go to church to worship and believa in god, and do everything by god but they don,t do everything by god they just pose to be doing everything by god. I know a couple of other people that are hypocrits. it was this group of nerds at Madison High acting like they had a gang made up that was so raw off the chain but it was so lame everyday after school all they did was go to the pizza bar and baet people out of their money what a wack click.

How Important Sound is to Poetry

Seventy-one percent of sound in this poem is important. In this poem there are not a lot of alliteration, and plenty of assonances, and no more sound devices in this poem. maybe they were just basing it on one point with not enough lines and words to provide more sound and these are the sound s they came up with. I know sound is what makes the readers or listeners more interested. If you here the poem and it has sound that makes feeling without using words to describe feeling and pictures that is what iterests the audience.

The most powerful figurative language

The most figurative language in this poem was hyperbole. The reason is she over exaggerated on the shapes colors and sizes of the birds in her poem. Out of nine lines there were no more figurative language, and there were no clich'es in the whole poem. This poet is a very smart person and intelligent person as far as it goes when it's time to write poems. Another reason this is the only powerful part of figurative language because, this person basically wanted to have more interest in to poems.

Conclusion based on Good Poetry

The conclusion I came up with is that every poem that is good also has a good percentage of ajectives, verbs, and nouns. The poem is a good poem, because good poetry doesn't use a lot of adverbs and ajectives. The linking verbs are used a little but not to much it might make the poem cheesey. Then every percentage came out to be in the 90 to 80 percent range that is good that A+ material. that just give me more ideas about my poems and can also help me keep away from all the different words that turns a good poem bad. I also learned if I use less linking and more action and ajectives my poem will be able to be read and the person reading will be interested and understand my feeling in the poem or picture what I pictured when I wrote it.

Vivid Pictures of nouns in my mind

The nouns that I picture in my mind are the birds,colors, sizes, and the ground. The reason is because, i just can picture the birds eating and fighting eachother over food on the ground. When birds are fed they are fed what you give them and there isn't any telling how manybirds are going to come down to eat. When they do you see birds gong for the same piece of food. The nouns are all used in the correct way in this poem. She has very little abstact nouns, and the concrete nouns are used correcttly also. This poem helped me notice how to make my poem mmore concrete in nouns and ajectives.

lettersfromfather

byMona Van Duyn



The birds are eating and fighting, Ha! Ha! All shapesand colors and sizes coming out of our woodsbut we don't know what they are. Your Mother hopesyou can send us a kind of book that tells about birds.There is one the folks called snowbirds, they eat on the ground,we had the girl sprinkle extra there, but say,they eat something awful. I sent the girl to townto buy some more feed, she had to go anyway.