Day One

The first day I went to Lambert Airport for my 3:oopm flight. The flight lasted about two hours of listening to my mp3, juvenile, and kanye' west his latest album. As soon as I arrived I wanted some Mc Donalds fries so I bought a whole meal and two apple pies. At about 5:10pm I went and checked in my hotel at Paradise Inn, my room was a suite just know that it was one of the royals and it costed 160 dollars a night. I stayed in my room and fell asleep waiting the the we hours of club popping.
When I arrived at eureka california sorry I didn't do anything until about ten o'clock that night. When club hours started rocking, so I can kick it with new people. I had the perfect out fit I brought it from St.Louis. It was my favorite color red with a little black in it. I had my black paten leather shoes, and don't forget the assesories of the world it all was coordinated. I was clean as a mug. got tipsy went back to the hotel.
The second day I picked up me a rental car at budget car rentals. It was a Ford Focus 2008. You know a clean ligit mobile. Went and got me some more Mc Donalds cuz I love Mc Donalds.
Went back to my suite and called my brothers to let them know how peacful it is without them getting in my hair. It was cool.
The third day and I didn't feel a bit of homesick. I felt like shopping I bought me some shoes and a jacket that was for sale. It was 500 dollars altogether. After that I went back to the hotel suite and slept the day away again for the night of the time again at the Via Spot. Where the party stay cracking.
The forth day I'm leaving the at about five pm. that will be the end of the trip the forth day I did nothing until five.

My Vacation

The vacation I am on is so cool. I am in Eureka California it is bright as hell and also hot. As soon as I arrived I went to the beach and there were so many people out there. From all types of places. The hotel I am staying in costs 159 a night that is a lot, but there is a reason why. It has a jacuzee tub in it that can hold about 5 people. Thats only if I let five people in. The first day I arrived I couldn't wait until club hours so I could go and kick it with some poeple that seemed cool, but not to make them my buddies but just to have fun. Tomarrow I go home and I really don't want to go but my flight leaves at 2:00 pm. Yesterday was the day that I had the time of my life I drove down to Daytona Beach to go see LIL wayne he rocked that beach. Everybody was there from him to baby to dip set they were there also. I really hope to do this again I had so much fun and I spent about a grand all together. I know my credit card bill is going to be sky high but it was worth it I kicked it holla back.

The First Day of My Vacation

This is the first day of my vacation I'm on my way to the lambert airport in St. Louis. My flight leaves at 3:00pm. It's 1:45 now I have to stop and get me some snacks for the ride, to put in my had bag. My flight to california is only going to take two hours. Bye, omvoyauge, see you in three days.

Who is a Hypocrit

The people that I know who are hypocrits are the people who go to church to worship and believa in god, and do everything by god but they don,t do everything by god they just pose to be doing everything by god. I know a couple of other people that are hypocrits. it was this group of nerds at Madison High acting like they had a gang made up that was so raw off the chain but it was so lame everyday after school all they did was go to the pizza bar and baet people out of their money what a wack click.

How Important Sound is to Poetry

Seventy-one percent of sound in this poem is important. In this poem there are not a lot of alliteration, and plenty of assonances, and no more sound devices in this poem. maybe they were just basing it on one point with not enough lines and words to provide more sound and these are the sound s they came up with. I know sound is what makes the readers or listeners more interested. If you here the poem and it has sound that makes feeling without using words to describe feeling and pictures that is what iterests the audience.

The most powerful figurative language

The most figurative language in this poem was hyperbole. The reason is she over exaggerated on the shapes colors and sizes of the birds in her poem. Out of nine lines there were no more figurative language, and there were no clich'es in the whole poem. This poet is a very smart person and intelligent person as far as it goes when it's time to write poems. Another reason this is the only powerful part of figurative language because, this person basically wanted to have more interest in to poems.

Conclusion based on Good Poetry

The conclusion I came up with is that every poem that is good also has a good percentage of ajectives, verbs, and nouns. The poem is a good poem, because good poetry doesn't use a lot of adverbs and ajectives. The linking verbs are used a little but not to much it might make the poem cheesey. Then every percentage came out to be in the 90 to 80 percent range that is good that A+ material. that just give me more ideas about my poems and can also help me keep away from all the different words that turns a good poem bad. I also learned if I use less linking and more action and ajectives my poem will be able to be read and the person reading will be interested and understand my feeling in the poem or picture what I pictured when I wrote it.

Vivid Pictures of nouns in my mind

The nouns that I picture in my mind are the birds,colors, sizes, and the ground. The reason is because, i just can picture the birds eating and fighting eachother over food on the ground. When birds are fed they are fed what you give them and there isn't any telling how manybirds are going to come down to eat. When they do you see birds gong for the same piece of food. The nouns are all used in the correct way in this poem. She has very little abstact nouns, and the concrete nouns are used correcttly also. This poem helped me notice how to make my poem mmore concrete in nouns and ajectives.

lettersfromfather

byMona Van Duyn



The birds are eating and fighting, Ha! Ha! All shapesand colors and sizes coming out of our woodsbut we don't know what they are. Your Mother hopesyou can send us a kind of book that tells about birds.There is one the folks called snowbirds, they eat on the ground,we had the girl sprinkle extra there, but say,they eat something awful. I sent the girl to townto buy some more feed, she had to go anyway.