Vivid Pictures of nouns in my mind

The nouns that I picture in my mind are the birds,colors, sizes, and the ground. The reason is because, i just can picture the birds eating and fighting eachother over food on the ground. When birds are fed they are fed what you give them and there isn't any telling how manybirds are going to come down to eat. When they do you see birds gong for the same piece of food. The nouns are all used in the correct way in this poem. She has very little abstact nouns, and the concrete nouns are used correcttly also. This poem helped me notice how to make my poem mmore concrete in nouns and ajectives.